Explanation Writing My Self-assessment.

WALT use the writing rubric to assess our writing.

Plastic Pollution

Plastic Pollution is killing sea life, seabirds and other sea animals there is to much plastic in the world it even gets sent to the landfill and floats away into the water which kills the sea animals.

So what has been done to solve the plastic pollution problem?

The first thing people have been doing to solve the plastic pollution problem is using a litter less lunch box. People are not using big bags of chips with mini chip packets. People are grabbing big bags so it wont send that much rubbish to the landfill.

 Another thing to solve the plastic pollution problem is people don’t use plastic bags they use cotton bags. If people throw a plastic bag into the water turtles will think it’s a jelly-fish so they will eat it.

The last thing to solve the plastic pollution problem is that people are sending the plastic to a factory so they can turn it into shoes furniture and clothes and there will be less plastic in the world. The sea animals will no longer die from Plastic Pollution. So our world will be a safe and better world.

So in conclusion sealife are dying from the plastic pollution problem but people are trying their best to solve the problem so our world will be safe.                              Hilton.

Element		Rubric Score
Ideas	I have lots of ideas that connect to the topic with some extra information.	4
Structure	I have all the structure which is BBC beginning,  body, conclusion.	4
Language	I use most of appropriate words for the type of writing
Organisation	I put my ideas in order. And use words to link my ideas together.	4
Vocabulary	I can write a lot of simple words and some extra words to add detail.	3
Sentence Structure	I can write most of my sentences correctly. I can write sentences with different beginnings and different lengths and types.	4
Punctuation	I mostly use full stops and capital letters correctly. And I use some other punctuation correctly	3
Spelling	I spell lots of Essential List words correctly	3

                                              

In Total 26 / 3b.