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I will have a title
I will have an orientation(Who What Where When How)
I will use sequence
Words (first next after that then finally shortly-after)
I talked about how I felt.
In the Holidays. 30/4/19.
On a bright sunny Thursday morning I was lying in my bed and I was thinking about what I was going to do, as I was lying in my bed I said to my brother “we should go over to our nana’s house”, and he said “ok”, but we will have to see if they curtains are opened.” and I said “I’ll look.” and they weren't so I said “I will go over their.” and he said “ok” so I went over and checked if they were there. It was only my brother Tristan and he was sitting watching tv and he said “if you want a turn on Richards Ipad you are allowed” so I grabbed it and played Fortnite it was fun I was playing a new game mode called endgame there is even a new movie endga my Nana and uncle came back it was fun I had Thor’s hammer and Iron-man's gloves I was playing for a long time. Chace was coming over so I wondered if he wanted a turn he did so I gave him a turn. It was getting late so we had dinner we had butter chicken for dinner it was delicious we also had narn bread with it. After that I went outside to help my dad scrape all the paint off these really old wheels they were bronze with some white paint. I don’t know why my dad wanted to take all of the paint of the wheels, so I was just helping. We had to use a scraper and then the paint was so easy to take off. When we finished that. I was thinking why do days go so fast. I swifted into bed and I thought about what tomorrow was going to be like I thought
my day was awesome because I got too play a new game mode on Fortnite. I went to bed at 10 o’clock Then I had a good nights sleep.
