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I went to the park.
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On Sunday afternoon I went to the park with my family and the park was in Kaikohe.
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I felt fantastic because I like going to the park.
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When we got to the park we saw lots of people and lots of things to play on.
I said, “Hmmm what should I play on first, maybe the swing?” I jumped on the the swing. I went as high as a bird. I felt amazing.
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Next I went on the slide and I said, “Weee! I can go down fast. This is fun” I felt excellent
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After that I went on the monkeybars. I felt like I was Tarzan. I was swinging and swinging.I felt terrific.
Then we had to go home so we went in the car and drove home.
What an awesome time at the park.
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