Recount Writing:At the Market.

I am learning to use the correct structure for recount writing.

4.12.2017

Market Day

In the afternoon me and my family went to market in Tautoro School. My friends came too. It was Penaia and Zion. We went to the Senior park. After that me and Penaia went to get some candy floss. I said, “That was yum.” Even Penaia liked it. Later on I went to buy me some tickets. I got 6 tickets 3 for me and 3 for Penaia. Next me and Penaia went to get a drink because we were thirsty. I got a Coca Cola one and Penaia wanted one to and there was only one more left so Penaia got it. It was $1. Me and Penaia saw Zion with candy floss. After that me and Penaia went to see how much a chocolate brownie was and it was $2. You couldn’t pay with tickets you had to have real money. So I got $2 for me. Penaia got two off his tickets and swapped them for $2 so we got a chocolate brownie. One was for me and the other one was for Penaia. I said, “Wait Penaia. It has peanuts in it.”

Penaia said, “No!” Then Penaia said, “Luckily

I could take the peanuts out.”

So then Penaia took the peanuts out and ate the chocolate. Me and Penaia said, “That was yum.” Then me and Penaia said we wanted to know how much the american hotdogs were. So we looked at the list where the food was and it said $4 and I got 4 tickets. I got 2 tickets  for me and 2 tickets for Penaia then Penaia asked his dad for 2 tickets so he gave 2 tickets to Penaia and Penaia gave me 1 ticket and he had another one for him. Finally I asked them if there was any American hot dogs and they said, “There are no more left and me and Penaia said, “Noo!” So I got a juicy and Penaia got an ice block. They were one ticket. All the classes were starting to pack up so Penaia’s dad said that Penaia had to go. So they went.

So then my brother’s were having a banana split and when they finished their banana split we went home.