Hi Hilton. My name is Mahuta and I am a year 7 student at Kawakawa primary school. I am also doing the S.L.J. I like your rhyming poem its really cool and creative. However you could of attributed the image that you used and you could of told your readers what your activity was about. But other than that great blog post. Maybe you could give me some tips on my blog.http://kpsmahutah.blogspot.com/ Blog you later:)
What an awesome poem about being on the moon. I would have never thought about rhyming dust with fussed but it works so well! Do you enjoy writing poems? You definitely seem like a natural poet. I think we need more New Zealand poets. Do you think you would enjoy visiting the moon? I think it would be scary but a one in a lifetime opportunity. I mean, how many people can say that they have been on the moon!
You can learn more about attributing images on our website, here is the specific link to the right page: https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/cybersmart Keep up the awesome posts.
Hi Hilton. My name is Mahuta and I am a year 7 student at Kawakawa primary school. I am also doing the S.L.J. I like your rhyming poem its really cool and creative. However you could of attributed the image that you used and you could of told your readers what your activity was about. But other than that great blog post. Maybe you could give me some tips on my blog.http://kpsmahutah.blogspot.com/
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Hilton,
What an awesome poem about being on the moon. I would have never thought about rhyming dust with fussed but it works so well! Do you enjoy writing poems? You definitely seem like a natural poet. I think we need more New Zealand poets. Do you think you would enjoy visiting the moon? I think it would be scary but a one in a lifetime opportunity. I mean, how many people can say that they have been on the moon!
You can learn more about attributing images on our website, here is the specific link to the right page: https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/cybersmart
Keep up the awesome posts.
Blog ya later,
Dani