Pollution

Explain writing about Pollution:

WALT describe,.environmental problems and explain. what people do to reduce its impact on our world. 

Introduction.

 Pollution is an introduction into the environment of a substance which has harmful or poisonous effects. What this means to me is the starting of a poisonous effect which is coming from plastic bottles, plastic bags, and other plastic things.

There are lots of pollutions such as:

•  Land pollution

• Air pollution

• Water pollution

Plastic pollution is rubbish smoke and waste, Pollution can happen in many places such as a lake and beaches and other places. At the beach people throw their rubbish on the sand and when the water comes onto the sand it pulls the rubbish in the water. Rubbish can keep going and going out to sea and all the turtles and fish eat the rubbish. They can get tangled up into the plastic bags and that can kill them or injure them.

The second reason for pollution is that people are burning fossil coal and rubbish. This affects the air we breathe because some rubbish can be poisonous and toxic. Also there's smoke in the air called smog which is in some places like China, japan, london and more. It looks like fog but it is the plastic, fossil and fuels being ignited into a smokey gas. 

Another reason for pollution is that plastic at beaches can stay up to 1000 years plastic bottles 450 years and plastic bags are around 10 to 20 years to break down.

So in conclusion I think people should stop the pollution so they would stop dumping their rubbish at beaches and other places. Which would stop killing ocean animals and birds, and hopefully people will start reusing things. Using cotton bags and metal straws and drinking out of cups not plastic bottles, We need to stop pollution and save the world.

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